Blog writting exercise (Describe a childhood birthday)
Describe a childhood birthday.
A few years ago on my birthday, I celebrated my birthday at Sentosa with my best friends. My mother decided that we could stay at the chalet over there for two days one night. My friends and I thought that it was a splendid idea. We met at Vivo city then we did a little shopping then we took the sky train to Sentosa and the ride was fantastic. Along the way, we talked about what we were going to do for the rest of the two days.
When we reached, my mother together with us decided to eat lunch. We ate at a resturant that I forgot the name. Oh well. After lunch we went to the chalet to put our bags down and get ready to go on the skyride and the luge which was spectacular! We were a little hungry for a snack, so we went to the nearest snack shop to buy our snacks. Later on we went to other rides and attractions like the Tiger Sky tower, Merlion walk, Underwater World, The flying Trapepeze, Dolphin Lagoon, Songs of the sea and a few more that I forgot. Well it was a birtday I would never ever forget and we had an awesome time there.
A few years ago on my birthday, I celebrated my birthday at Sentosa with my best friends. My mother decided that we could stay at the chalet over there for two days one night. My friends and I thought that it was a splendid idea. We met at Vivo city then we did a little shopping then we took the sky train to Sentosa and the ride was fantastic. Along the way, we talked about what we were going to do for the rest of the two days.
When we reached, my mother together with us decided to eat lunch. We ate at a resturant that I forgot the name. Oh well. After lunch we went to the chalet to put our bags down and get ready to go on the skyride and the luge which was spectacular! We were a little hungry for a snack, so we went to the nearest snack shop to buy our snacks. Later on we went to other rides and attractions like the Tiger Sky tower, Merlion walk, Underwater World, The flying Trapepeze, Dolphin Lagoon, Songs of the sea and a few more that I forgot. Well it was a birtday I would never ever forget and we had an awesome time there.
posted by dione at
8:59 PM
2 Comments:
Very good. :D Try not to use so many " then" 's . And you wrote " We ate at a resturant that I forgot the name. " Its supposed to be " that i forgot the name of" :D But, overall, it was awesome.
A few years ago ... how many years la pantat ? joking lah babe don't take it too hard
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